Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough.
What are the reasons for this?
What are some possible solutions for this?
The average life length expectation has been rising for decades due to continuous advancements in medicine. Nowadays, the elderly are recommended to perform physical exercises, however only a few follow this advises. This essay will discuss the primary reasons of this phenomenon as well as provide a feasible solution.
The main reason of poor physical activity for old people is a bad physical conditions of their bodies, caused by injuries received throughout their lives, which make exercises hard to perform. In addition to the above-mentioned aspect, retired people usually do not possess enough money to afford gyms or special courses that help individuals with making a program of training. On top of that, incorrectly performed exercise can harm significantly the human health, thus individuals should be either taught the correct movements or controlled by gym employees that are trained and can prevent injuries. For instance, the Ministry of Health of the United States if America has reported that more than 100000 people were damaged during their physical exercises every year. In other words, the old require special conditions to make a physical effort and keep their bodies in a good shape.
In order to overcome these issues, retired individuals should be provided with special places with necessary equipment and instructors that aid and control. To make it available for demographics, the government ought to render full assistance to such centers by funding them. According to the Cambridge report, this will not only increase the expected life length but also reduce the expenses of the national health care system.
In conclusion, this article has highlighted the major reasons of low physical activity of old people and suggested a viable solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...tivity for old people is a bad physical conditions of their bodies, caused by injuries rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38709677419 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78563116915 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6751465381 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219081737044 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764051729448 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542433036778 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132472784174 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509995158758 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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