Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? What can be done to help the poor?
Poverty is a global phenomenon that every country even in developed countries has. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.
There are some reasons why people are poverty-stricken. One reason is that war and violence always threaten people. After a war, not only results in the death but also destroys the possessions. For example, the economy of Viet Nam has always remained unchanged because it experienced the colonial force of France and America, while, America is one of the top countries and without having war. Another reason is the inability of poor households to invest in property and education. Education is the key to accelerate a country. This might negatively affect society and can even lead to criminal activities.
However, measures must be taken by governments and authorities to reduce the world poverty. Firstly, governments should not invest to produce weapons to attend the war. In fact, they must place much emphasis on improving the economy and prohibit the violence. Secondly, the executive branch must develop an education method. This can be done by encouraging rural people should not drop out of school in order to disappear the high poverty rate.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why impoverishment is prevalent among both developing and developed countries; and some measures could be taken to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24669603524 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83171860994 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616740088106 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5245604541 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243153314283 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680243629217 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693372628832 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136441330887 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645139587741 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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