Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The endangered languages is one of the problems which linguistics face with in recent years. Although some people believe should prevent to die out several languages in whole of the word, it is true with less languages people can live better. In my opinion, with lesser languages the life is easier and better.
One of the most important challenges which people face with is different languages. They should learn different languages if they want to connect with other people who live abroad. Not only should you spend lots of time to learn it but also, some languages are very difficult to learn such as Chinese that approximately is hardest language in the word. Hence people don’t have more tendency to learn more languages and this cause of people don’t relationship with each other.
Another point is that governments set rule to connection nations with each other. They determine an international language which people who live all of around the world should learn. This makes the live get easier and people can have relationship, trade, and lots of other things to do. Whereas, it is has become to consider for many linguistics that annually several languages die out, people like this because makes to share their emotional with each other. Although governments set different rule to tackle this problem, this work just is for historian which next generation get familiar with background of different languages.
In conclusion, it is true that people have feel better if there is a fewer languages and they can have relationship with each other. This makes easier life in different aspects.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s in whole of the word, it is true with less languages people can live better. In my...
^^^^
Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the hardest'.
Suggestion: is the hardest
...earn such as Chinese that approximately is hardest language in the word. Hence people don’...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...mately is hardest language in the word. Hence people don’t have more tendency to lear...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58268738312 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48679245283 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.387141795 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353198517283 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140720563149 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638553540104 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241792716882 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416457239083 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s in whole of the word, it is true with less languages people can live better. In my...
^^^^
Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the hardest'.
Suggestion: is the hardest
...earn such as Chinese that approximately is hardest language in the word. Hence people don’...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...mately is hardest language in the word. Hence people don’t have more tendency to lear...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58268738312 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48679245283 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.387141795 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353198517283 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140720563149 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638553540104 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241792716882 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416457239083 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.