Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people believe that the disappearance of languages currently makes their life simpler. While i accept that this disappearance can make communication more convenient, i would argue that language is important and necessary for each country.
on the one hand, language extinction make it simple to live for some reasons. Firstly, each person only need study one or two languages, so they may save an amount of time and spend it on developing other skills. This may contribute to be more complete development's person. Secondly, people can communicate and make clear their feelings easily. Thanks to communication, all nations on the world can cooperate and give supports each other, which means the gap between the countries to be closer.
On the other hand, i believe that languages play a vital role in people lives because of various reasons. The first one is that language is a specific feature of each country. Therefore, language can show culture and tradition of nation, which helps people to discover and understand ethnic identity of country. Additionally, since language is one of important researches in human society, more and more languages can make it various to create linguistic sources and materials. This can play an important role in scientia evolution.
In conclusion, while few languages mean better communication and better understanding among nations, i think those languages are unique factor and can not lose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31004366812 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90745099621 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5282836346 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214826483909 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864252533674 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411899325762 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140648137553 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394861538799 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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