Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet.
Do you agree or disagree?
Concerning the issue of eating habits, it is believed that many people choose to become vegetarians instead of eating meat in order to have a healthy diet. As far as I am concerned, I do partially agree with this opinion due to some following reasons.
First of all, It can be said with certainty that the vegetarian diet is very healthy for people to avoid risks of illness such as heart disease, diabetes. It is due to the fact that It is not only low in fat, high in fiber but it also provides enough nutritrions our body needs everyday. For instance, without eating some kinds of meat, raw spinach should be a better choice to have healthy diet.
In addition to this, a subsequent factor could be because having a vegetarian diet is an effective way for people to save their money and their pleisure time. For example, the research of American scientists concluded that people who have a vegetarian diet can economize up to 750 Dollars per year compared to those who eat meat. Besides that, because becoming vegetarian can lessen the risks of illness, vegetarians need not to spend time meeting doctors every month.
In contrast, It must be admitted that when becoming vegetarian, people should choose the right proportion of vegetarian food to meet energy needs non-vegetarian food supplies. Moreover, they also need to be careful in cooking methods in order to prevent them from being shortage in protein.
Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thoughts to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussion are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that people should eat vegetarian food effectively instead of making full use of those food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...vides enough nutritrions our body needs everyday. For instance, without eating some kind...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spend'?
Suggestion: spend
... risks of illness, vegetarians need not to spend time meeting doctors every month. In c...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
...fectively instead of making full use of those food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91034482759 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6688051275 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1263473934 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344973239455 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121281934388 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661689182113 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188377333555 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676273688608 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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