Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an ever-increasing number of vegetarians in the modern society because many scientific research have shown that vegetable contains an adequate amount of vitamins and minerals needed for human health. Therefore, eating meat is optional. Personally, I absolutely agree with this opinion.
It should be borne in mind that becoming vegetarian is beneficial. Firstly, a plant-based diet supplies enough nutrition for our health. Various kinds of vitamins and minerals found in vegetable such as A, K, E (to name just a few) are scientifically proven to be vital to human physical and mental developments. These essential nutrients perform hundreds of roles in our body, shoring up bones, healing wounds and bolstering our immune system, for instance. Secondly, vegetable consumption helps to ward off diseases, especially high blood pressure or obesity since it is typically low in fat and high in fiber.
On the other hand, it is also being argued that the consumption of meat is indispensable. Meat is an extremely high content of vitamins and minerals and proteins such as iron and zinc which are essential for being healthy. For example, red meat is an excellent source or proteins which helps build and repair muscles as well as maintain healthy hair, bone and skin. However, according to a novel health research at Hanoi Medical University last year, meat consumption directly links to the risks of developing chronic illness such as heart diseases, diabetes and some forms of cancer and obesity. Additionally, since a lot of vital nutrients in meat can be found in vegetable, a meat-based diet is nonobligatory and in fact, it is not being recommended in a balanced, healthy diet.
In conclusion, although meat is necessary, plant foods is enough to have to healthy diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20069204152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96303701749 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8264483069 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173913815973 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633301747466 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565985155741 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120217829031 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446643309017 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.