Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
Numerous cities in all over the world have been in adversity of shortage of accomodation gravely in recent years. Some reasons explaining this issue and suggested solutions will be presented in this essay.
There are two main reasons why lack of housing is a grave problem in many cities. Firstly, due to the outbreak of population since the birth rate in many countries have experienced a significant increase recently, it seems that there are not enough houses for everyone, especially for urban drwellers. As a result, more and more people are in need of purchasing a house or an apartment to se...
- People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 73
- More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why? Who benefits more from this, the community or these young people? 73
- Developments in technology have brought various environmental problem. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give 84
- Recently we are facing increasing number of cars which poses a great threat to the pedestrians and cyclists What s more a lot of parks need to be sacrificed as a result of the construction of railways and superhighways Do you agree or disagree What do you 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one of the most prevailence in cities. To tackle this problem, suitable and imp...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...individual scale, each person should be an law-abiding citizen, which means that t...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...olicy. Specifically, each family should has one or two children in order to guarant...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ore and more high-storey buildings will helps to handle the current pressure of housi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, incidentally, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25752508361 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9064141686 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1995093063 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210715355494 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758596337685 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600394327767 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138388213873 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583421752105 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.