Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
Doing outdoor training and giving time for their families was the main reason for the elderly to improve the wealthy of their minds. But that time was over, nowadays, the old ones’ experience being alone and having many diseases that cause them a lot of despair. Therefore, some proper solutions have been made to solve this issue.
The fear of death happened to be the source that lead to unhappiness of the elders. Their fear may be various, but they share one common point and that point related to outside of their house. For instance, they scare that some vehicles might hit them and put an end to their life. Furthermore, their families so worry that they lock them in their rooms because of their safety. When families lock old people away, they prevent elders from their freedom and make them suffer from loneliness then lead to the birth of sickness. Because they can’t make conversation with others that share the same age and problems.
Some answers have been made to evaluate and encourage the elders to stop their fear of death. Their families must put an ease to their fear by caring more about them, provide them with their basic needs for mind and body. For instance, family often bring their grandparents to health care center with purpose of checking their health. In addition, elders have their relative sign in a club of old people with the main object is a place for them to share their thought, problems and about their life. That make them feel much better than staying in their rooms and wait for their death.
To be concluded, the fear of death is main reason lead to unhappiness and unhealthy of old ages. Therefore, families can make proper solutions to ease their mind such as checking their health regularly and helping them to meet people at the same age group like them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77287066246 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18231787777 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492113564669 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.260615061 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116391206585 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504208076177 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344405982065 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834083962546 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225331467613 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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