The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fossil fuels are the most common sources of energy in this technologically advanced era. Some people suggest that thorough research should be conducted to discover other forms of energy which are less harming and this should be the top most priority worldwide. Even I advocate this suggestion due to various reasons which are highlighted further.
To begin with, I would say that fossil fuels such as coal, petrol, diesel etcetera are the resources which are not available in abundance and come at a huge cost from the nature. Despite this fact, people are using it extensively for many purposes like running their vehicles, factories and so on. It can be undeniably said that humans have become over-dependent on these energy resources which is leading to their excessive utilization at a global measure. If this is left undealt with, then the coming generations in the world will have to face serious downturns due to fact that once depleted, fossil fuels take millions of years to regenerate. Thus, such a step of finding alternative sources of energy today can sageguard the tomorrow of mankind.
Moving further, another point to strengthen my viewpoint that I would like to put forward is that, usage of fossil fuels is not environment friendly. It is greatly meddling with the ecological balance and is the root cause of various big issues disturbing the well-being of people. Global warming, which is increasing the temperature of the planet, is spreading its wings due to emission of gases such as carbon monoxide, from the vehicles running on petrol and diesel. Not to mention, the level of air pollution is also sky-rocketing with every passing day in cities like New Delhi, Tokyo, Mexico City, New York and many more. This is also because of factories burning coal to run. All this is alarming enough to make the world think of some ways to edify the scenario.
To conclude, I would again reinstate that it should be the primary concern all over the world to establish other more reliable forms of power to save the mankind from the severe blows of nature. This will undoubtedly secure the future of the planet and its dwellers as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93131868132 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59692412551 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.357170714 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139737610847 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042789384788 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456587676518 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858080319686 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456727920579 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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