Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that families of children who are taught by private schools should not need to support the state education system by paying taxes. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement.
There are many reasons why it would be wrong that families who pay for private schools should not need to pay taxes. Firstly, paying taxes backing the education system of a nation is a duty to all citizens. Specifically, people usually pay a certain amount of taxes for public services that they rarely use in their life. For instance, most people hardly have an opportunity to call the police or the fire department, but people would not expect to reduce taxes for this. Secondly, the governments would have many difficulties in sorting out the number of students learning in private schools and calculate a certain amount of taxes they have to pay.
In my opinion, all people should be willing to offer our fair share to the funding of public schools. If families choose the private school, they will be able to have higher incomes because the tuition fee of private schools is almost more expensive than one of the state-funded schools. So, taxes that promote the public education system are a small expense to them. Furthermore, a high-quality education system that provides equal opportunities for all young people benefits all members of society. For example, these taxes could help students who have a poor background to go to school. As a result, the more high-educated workers are, the more developed the country is.
In conclusion, I believe that parents of children who attend private schools should contribute to the education system of authorities by paying taxes.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04964539007 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67374005298 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524822695035 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6465333513 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37670649443 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143457630969 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921088388495 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282218350609 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10546589164 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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