We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries and we should only take care of our society. I partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, I accept that we should prioritize helping people in our communities and nations. Firstly, each country is facing many serious problems such as overpopulation, poverty, environmental pollution, lack of resources,... We should not blame the government for these issues because it also is the citizen's responsibility. Our little action will make our countries become better. For example, in order to protect the environment, we should reduce our plastic waste instead of using cloth bags, glass cups,... Secondly, there are many needy people around us. To support them, we can donate clothings, money, serve free meals and even find jobs for them.
On the other hand, personally, we should also try to support people in other nations. Now, many advanced countries are helping some other developing nations because they must face many problems which they can not afford to deal with. For instance, in Covid-19, every four minutes, one person dies in New Delhi-the capital of India because of lack of oxygen. Many countries, especially the U.K provide a lot of oxygen machines, vaccines to help people in India. By this way, nations can improve their harmony, interact with each other.
In conclusion, in my opinion, besides helping our communities and our countries, we should try to help a broader group of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15226337449 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67989403481 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0682605286 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311547899581 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111982291883 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916288411074 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23813534753 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934669257377 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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