Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions in this?
Fast food has been at the center of debates these days. There are two different attitudes toward this controversial issue. While countless advocates admit fast food, it is widely disagreed with consuming fast food due to the detrimental impaction on health as well as society.
First and foremost, we cannot acknowledge the negative effect of junk food on our health, coronary heart disease and hyperlipidemia are salient examples. Also, fast food is considered as a crucial cause of obesity which has been an insurmountable problem recently. Thus, it is obvious that fast food causes major health problem which may lead to serious consequences.
Furthermore, the critical issue is whether consuming fast food become a norm, rather than the exception. In other words, if fast food serves frequently, it may replace by conventional food which is vital for every nation cultures. China, as an example, becomes vastly rely on fast food such as MacDonald. Consequently, tourists have slight opportunities to become familiar with their traditional food. Thus, conservative food considers as a part of a culture which should be conserved.
By way of conclusion, by analyzing the drawbacks of fast food, it is obvious that while consuming fast food is inevitable, it should be limited in order to decline the harmful effect on individual and society as the whole term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27853881279 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.949927191 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5578844256 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200913811492 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808612382464 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308331536691 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12892813153 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391005098856 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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