Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?
It is argued that the great development in fast food is considered to be favorable because of its convenience and relative low cost while some are against this idea. I would argue that the harmful effects of fast food far outweigh its benefits. there are two main reasons for this.
The most obvious effect of fast food have on human body is health. Fast food is known as junk food which contains a great amount of saturated-fat causes some cardiology-related diseases when they gradually replace conventional meals and have fast food on a regular basis. Modern and busy society depends on fast food for efficient and convenient solution for preparing food. Therefore, fast food is becoming a universal trend.
People are living in a busy world that makes them on-the-go most of the time. It leads to the time limit of having traditional meals, so fast food is the best choice in this case. However, it will brings some disadvantages related to family relationship. Traditional meal is a meaningful moment for family members to have a chat and to increase relationship between parents and children. The replacement of fast food makes members distance from each other because they occupy themselves with their own business.
To conclude, fast food undoubtedly have negative effects on our lives including both health and lifestyles. I believe that people should consume moderate amount of fast food so that they will prevent some certain risks of health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0826446281 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77364778847 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7026128206 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257333691942 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100385831786 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064792698632 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156598434066 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443927521186 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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