Films and computer games containing violence is popular these days. Many people believe that this should be banned while others believe that they are just for refreshment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
we can do so many enjoy with films and video games but nowadays movies and gaming includeing violence is very famous these days, so many people think that this types of games should be banned. when some people believe that it is just for entertainment. this eassy want to discuss both views.
there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance but, the most preponderant one is that the revolution of movies and gaming is very popular day-by-day so that it is very dangerous for children because children want to become film characters and it is a violence movies and video games make to people lazy and their effects on their work or study. films and computer game make to angry and violence, and furthermore it is waste of time for people. sometimes children copy to films characters stunts so that they put in high problems. one of the most important example is that a pubg mobile game, nowadays it is very popular among the teenagers.
On other side, there are myriad of reasons responsible for this burning concern, the most preponderant is that game and movie is very important for people, films are relevant about the historical places and wars and also real incidents so that, people can know about culture and history. people can watch important of violence, when we got a freedom through British rules. films and gaming create so many version like 2D, 3D and many more effect. Their creativity is very difficult and it is very important for people amusement and refreshment.
To conclude, I suggest to banned violence of films and games but sometimes I prefer to watch and play games or movies for entertainment. one important proverb is that "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy".
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| 2021-07-01 | mai nahi batau ga | 56 | view |
| 2019-04-03 | Dhruv123 | 100 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79124579125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5436011281 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498316498316 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.7074174867 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305080207225 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111969837069 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675724220954 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194143609944 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100387393462 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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