Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Other think that industries are the ones cousing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
pollution, that which increasing rapidly, is the most threatening issue the world faces today. many people think that the enlargement number of car is main reason for high pollution and wastage, and other believe that companies are the biggest source for pollution. I examine my views in further eassy with opinion.
there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that the high numbers of cars is main roles for rising pollution. cars do only one pollution, which is a air pollution so that, we should less uses of the cars. While,furthermore car do not create any types of others waste. cars have exiting some gases through the exhaust smoke such as carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide and some few. For example, Delhi is the first city to spoil high pollution and also, every years 65% peoples died due to cancer.
On other hand, there are myriad of reasons responsible for this burning concern but one of is that in the modern country there are lots of industries and multinational companies are exist due to more industries doing large amounts pollution of the world. they create lots of pollution like air, soil, water and noise pollution. More over, they produce lots of wastage like row materials, some broken products and many more in to add with some chemical factory spread largest amount of air pollution. For instance, some companies perhaps realese waste water in lake or ocean so that, they spread water pollution.
To conclude, in my point of view industries and multinational companies expance huge pollution rather than cars. industries create more pollution which is harmful for our health and our world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97491039427 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57204860486 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0825972737 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293593403406 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984593094073 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733724285952 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185759026089 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942420106691 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.