The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
After the human invented the car, the number of cars have been increasing until nowadays and it is causing numerous problems in the world. Some experts announced that the figure of cars was over 29 millions on British roads until the year 2000. This can be clearly seen that it is big problem not only in UK but also in many other countries.
To begin with, it is considered by many that we should invent alternative vehicle instead of the car and I also totally agree about this opinion. Because, plenty of number of cars in the major cities have been bringing a lot of problems, such as traffic jams, air pollution, noise problems etc. For example, many people in the major cities are suffering by air pollution. Chinese people should wear the mask when they go out. Furthermore, everyone would have experiences by traffic jam. As a result, after people recognise this problems, we began to invent new vehicle for replacing the care, such as public transports, electronic cars etc.
Secondly, some people support the opinion that there should be laws to compel vehicle use. Consequently, many countries have considered about this laws. For instance, there are some laws to force car ownership in order to prevent problems of car in my country. People who have a car have to choose a day that they can't drive and if they drive the day that they can't drive, they have to pay for fine.
In conclusion, I definitely believe that we should invent and develop alternative vehicle instead of cars and make laws to compel car use. Otherwise, the problems that the cars brought may be expanded. Eventually, we might face the bigger problems than i mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78745644599 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49489517543 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6291116048 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26674923007 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939683436069 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797983898047 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176928690606 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527821875442 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.