Fossil fuels is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Fossil fuels has played an important role in every fields and many aspects of life for several years. However, in many countries, people are encouraging using other energy sources in stead of traditional energies. This essay will elaborate on the benefits before highlighting the drawbacks.
First of all, using alternative energy sources may bring about numerous benefits to the human life which are related to protection of the environment technologies development and the future. Particularly, if the industrial zones replace oil and gas by nuclear power, they will make valuable contribution to the preservation of the environment. For instance, some renewable energies such as solar, tidal, wind and more are able to generate the same or even bigger amount of electricity than the traditional ones with no associated with discharging poisonous emissions. Thank to these energies, people also could alleviate several environmental issues, especially the green house effect so that they will be less likely to have serious diseases like skin cancer, asthma, parasite and more. Secondly, as soon as nuclear power are in use, the infrastructure will also be developed which leads to innovations in advanced technologies. Therefore, life quality will also be improved via new materials and a clear environment. Last but not least, taking the advantages of natural power is also a smart way to guarantee a boundless supply of energy for the future generations. For example, carbon-intensive resources are limited as they takes million of years to be formed. When they are used up, people's lives would be exerted a pressure on.
On the other hand, despite the nuclear power's advantages, there are some cons in which should be concerned seriously. Firstly, energy stems from the milky way or some strange patterns are being criticized because of producing radioactive emissions. Furthermore, when this emissions leak out to the atmosphere, they will affect the plants, animals and the residential people. In addition, renewable energy generation relies heavily on the weather. Therefore, people will get struggle with having not enough energy to consume which may even lead to energy-shortage crisis. In this case, many factors of life will also be influenced and the economy of all countries would fall out to great depression.
In conclusion, because everything has both sides good and bad, people should consider whether using nuclear powers could better than burning fossil fuels. In my opinion, I suppose that the government should encourage all companies using renewable energy from natural sources in order to manufacture or delivery. If they was successful, the world will become a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: instead of
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Suggestion: take
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...could better than burning fossil fuels. In my opinion, I suppose that the governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39529411765 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91799238943 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595294117647 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9645806729 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.19047619 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0952380952 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145080057082 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444676996435 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527723563692 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101238506308 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297234410881 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.