The freedom to work and live anywhere has become the main trend due to development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of these development outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss.
There is no even a shadow of doubt technology has revolutionized in each and every field. Nowadays people can do work anywhere they want and they can accommodate anywhere. This essay will discuss the advantages and shortcomings of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, there are ample advantages of this, firstly, people do not need to go anywhere because they can complete their work setting at any with the help of computer. And, they can easily reach at any place in a few hours and people also can migrate toward good places , where lot of facilities available such as good education , transportation and health regard facilities .
On the other hand , there are some disadvantages of this which we can not overlooked. Firstly , it cause lot of pollution problems occur because people use private vehicles to approach any place.
To conclude, according to my point of view everything has some pros and cons just like medical pills have side effects. But its advantages outweigh on its disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'look', 'so', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233695652174 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.152173913043 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.054347826087 0.0946595960268 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0597826086957 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.054347826087 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114130434783 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86888449976 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0217391304348 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0978260869565 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0380434782609 0.021408717616 178% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108695652174 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1011.0 1933.35771543 52% => OK
No of words: 171.0 316.048096192 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91228070175 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20517956788 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304093567251 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233918128655 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187134502924 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12865497076 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86888449976 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.037074148 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.56093040696 119% => OK
Word variations: 67.7392471931 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3738017046 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.814263465372 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.3918128655 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.38775510204 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361397530173 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0694475901332 0.102741220458 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0662028390955 0.0668466124924 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582999656406 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105368776606 0.148594505496 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149264689543 0.134430193775 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685120407087 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263557970034 0.324371583561 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103310709735 0.0638462369009 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222544938257 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518383285177 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.4468937876 38% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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