Gender Equality
Female position among society has changed for the last 5 decades but still can not be assumed gender equality has been achieved. I strongly agree since there is still found much discrimination against women's role and salary in the work environment.
Women are found tends to be at a lower level at work compared to men when it comes to the job role, making them unable to reach a leadership position. This is because of the stigma given to women that they are too sentimental to lead staff so that they are not being objective at work. Research conducted by ILO in 2019 stated that more than 70% of women in the tech industry only reach the middle management at work since they were told that they were too overthink when it comes to working.
Salary discrimination has also occurred to women as they were assumed to do lighter work than men even the workload is proven to be the same. This leads to demotivation happening to women when receiving less than they should. A survey conducted by McKinsey in 2020 found that the highest company turnover rate in the industrial sector was dominated by women in the middle management. The reason was that they did get paid as much as their men acquaintance.
In conclusion, role and salary discrimination against women at work are prone to be the primary reason why gender equality is barely achieved in the last decade. This should be improved by the government by creating tight regulations regarding this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77647058824 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63105985694 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6315133266 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094968066945 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451622888204 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959248876424 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897001246537 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897509779987 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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