global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment.
what causes global warming?
what can be done to solve this problem?
Global warming is considered one of the top serious issues that people are suffering from it. This problem will be discussed in order to figure out some main reasons and offer several measures for tackle it.
The number of factors leading to the rapid increase in the earth’s temperatures. The first reason comes from air pollution from burning fossil fuels such as coal, gas, petro in the factories or the traffic vehicles. As a result, all the gas emission is released and get stuck in the atmosphere, contributing to global warming and greenhouse issue. As the burning action, due to advances in technology, the increase in the energy for devices lead to nature's problem. For example, each citizen has their own electronic device needed to be used every day and more energy is required. The high temperature is caused by that factors. Another serious major problem for rising earth’s temperature is deforestation for different purposes. Although forests are being known as the lung of the earth where clean all air impurity and release O2, thousand of hectares are being cut down with a myriad of trees. The rising speed of CO2 in the air increase which is considered the main reason for global warming.
While it would be impossible to completely eliminate air pollution, some steps can be implemented to address it. Firstly, reduce the dependence on using fossil fuels and give priority to the development of renewable sources. Take solar, wind, and wave energy, for instance, the using natural sources can be considered the best proper way to dropping air pollution rates. Thus, the amount of CO2 is limited. Another solution belongs in government responsibilities that is managing and protecting rainforest by imposing strict sanctions on illegal deforesting. Besides that, they should encourage citizens to join in afforesrting activities in other to contribute to the growth of the ecosystem. The last important thing is increasing and training the responsibility of citizens. They must be fully aware of the serious effect of global warming and help in different ways. They can use public transport to moving instead of private vehicles, planting more trees in the neighborhood. All of that will have a great impact on our major house.
In conclusion, global warming results from a number of reasons. Nevertheless, some solutions can be carried out to fight against the problem.
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| 2021-07-16 | Phan phương linh | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 834, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... clean all air impurity and release O2, thousand of hectares are being cut down with a m...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14358974359 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82006989529 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7466069181 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2173913043 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211533568176 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572838507287 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600755356093 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156607358726 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446562574285 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.