It is irrefutable that climate change due to global warming is causing devastating effect to our environment.This vicious cycle has a number of causative factors such as green-house gases, deforestation.This essay will delve into the causes of global warming and propose some measures to address this problem.
To begin with, one of the most significant causes of global warming is the emission of green-house gases. This is because, these toxic gases are emitted excessively from burning of fossil fuel, which is used to run vehicle and generating electricity in recent times. This harmful gases result in depletion of ozone layer, causing higher amount of ultraviolet rays to enter into the earth’s surface; therefore, paving the way to global warming. Another reason for this phenomenon is the deleterious impact of deforestation. In other words, people are indiscriminately chopping down trees to make way for new residential areas. However, the primary job for trees is to absorb carbon-dioxide gas, which is mainly responsible for global warming. Thus, deforestation adds to the exaggeration of global warming.
To combat this issue, two effective solutions can be implemented. Firstly, all the nations of the world should agree upon to use renewable energy sources such as solar, wind or tidal energy, which are very much environment-friendly and a lot cheaper than the fossil fuel. For instance, Since Germany declared to use only renewable energy sources in 2018, it has already started recovering from the damage of global warming. Secondly, government should pass stringent laws in order to prohibit deforestation. Instead of cutting down trees recklessly, we should find out other means to solve accommodation problem. If there remain more trees, then the chances of mitigating the problems of global warming will increase to a great extent.
In conclusion, green-house gases and deforestation are two of the main reasons why global warming is becoming severe day by day. However, this problem could be minimized by collaborative effort of every nation to use renewable energy sources and enforcing law against deforestation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45945945946 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1484678475 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606606606607 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0728399008 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324211131029 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955151938218 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741829578936 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196608320242 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581691133187 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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