Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
As the world evolves, the industrialization has become an inextricable part for every nation. there are many problems are existing in the outside world but global warming is a very serious problem. this essay will discuss the reasons behind global warming and what measures the government and people can take.
there are many reasons besides climate change but increase the number of an industry is the main factor. global warming is caused by carbon emission. If the amount of carbon is increased, the temperature of the atmosphere will rise which lead to climate change. the industry is a huge source of carbon which is released through the chimney. The survey was published by WHO stated that global warming has surged immensely for 2 decades when the industrialization took place.
Furthermore, the vehicle is also responsible for this situation. from last 2 to 3 decades there has been a gigantic amount of increment in vehicles. The vehicles run on the road are so increase the carbon edition in the atmosphere is an increase. people mostly prefer private vehicle instead of public transport as high ticket price. the expenditure on vehicles is escalated.
to prevent this situation, the government should impose high taxes on vehicles to deterring the people to buy and use public transport facilities. Higher authorities should encourage people by reducing the ticket cost of public facilities. they should also strive to implement some rules and regulation for industries to reduce the amount of carbon exit from the chimneys.
weighting the all-compelling argument, global warming will reduce not only the action of government but also follow their rules by individuals.without the support of the public this problem will not solve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26785714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92926603261 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9097453029 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194579778866 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649869611612 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103172223019 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11568854158 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117153690828 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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