The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Investments should never be biased.Few people think government investment in music,entertainment and culture is a waste of money and more should be spent on public services.However, I agree with the fact that more money should be spent on public services but the other areas cannot be overlooked.
First and foremost,public services are an important aspect to run every country smoothly,there are various public services like health,infrastructure if they will not be provided to the citizens adequately like by opening government hospitals,government offices then there will be dissatisfaction among the people of the country which will lead to a crisis in the future.
Secondly,public services should always be well maintained and expenditures on them must be made timingly and not once in a blue moon,only a well maintained health system and maintained infrastructure will make the citizens happy index chart of a country grow up and will make them work more with good facilities, this will further increase the ease of doing business and work in country.
However, I disagree with the fact that arts,music and theatre should be overlooked because they are an important part of an idol place where there is no music there is no happy life and if there are no theatres then there will be no place for a family to visit on holidays and release stress.Arts also help in nurturing the inner talent of a person,so proper investments should also be made in these sides to make an place happy place and not a stressful place with only public services in it.
Although,spendings should not be done on biased public opinions, they must be made according to the need of the hour and should be done equally to promote interest of each and every individual not only a group of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02027027027 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30128248316 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.8333272837 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 297.2 106.682146367 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.2 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230253615134 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127238285547 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867212882422 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127238285547 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867212882422 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.0946893788 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.