The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer
Some people think that public tobacco consumption should be limited, while others claim smoking to be their ultimate right. In regard to this problem, I side with the supporters of the governmental intervention, and believe that public spaces ought to be free from tobacco smoke.
Firstly, smoking in public places violates the right for healtfy environment of others. Nicotine does not only affect the direct consumer but also the people around. Passive smoking can be as harmful as an active, especially for non-tolerant of tobacco people (allergics, children, etc.). While I believe everybody should be entiteled to their body and poison themselves if they wish, they should not be allowed to affect people who have chosen a healfy lifestyle.
Another concern that should be taken into the account is the high danger of a fire connected with cigarettes. There are numerous of examples where inacuraccy with cigarettes have led to losses in infrastructure or even human lives. Therefore, as common areas usually attract an increased number of people, which often can not be evacuated quickly, additional anti-fire measures should be imposed there. Smokers here again increase danger not only for themselves, but also for other people.
In conclusion, it is the role of the government to keep public areas safe for citizens' lives and health. Smoking should be banned as an example of an action aiming to the opposite goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... tobacco people allergics, children, etc.. While I believe everybody should be ent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22173913043 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67385648579 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5835464614 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1971968401 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775831012734 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440061567444 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128213505177 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326252765149 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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