Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop country. Do you agree or disagree
It is said that Government should infuse more finance in scientific subjects more preferably rather than other educational subjects in order to develop country more. This essay is in disagreement with the said notion due to Science is a primary contributor in the development of a country and discipline that makes economy of a country well-developed.
To commence with,the authority of a country should not spent more expenses on science subjects because of development reasons is not mandatory. Science development, only factor does not make any country well-established.To explain it, all factors are equally responsible in the development of a country not only science subjects but also all are.for example, art, literature,history,etc. To epitome it,"The times of India" newspaper reports that 49% of the development happens because of science as it is a primary contributor whereas remaining 51% belongs to arts and literature sector. Hence, it is not mandatory for Government to invest funds on scientific education rather than other subjects for the growth of economy of a nation.
Furthermore, economic development of a country depends upon the discipline followed by the authorities of that nation. To explicate it, if the science field has great achievement, but if there is a no discipline then, there is no development happens, because of that field. To illustrate it, the implementation of scientific technology like computers, phones MP3 made work easy but makes human more indiscipline. Humans are now totally depends on machines.Therefore, discipline is very important in every field of a worke or the subjects which are responsible for enhancing country on a wind range.
To conclude, from my perspective it is not compulsory to fund more in science subjects whilst others for development of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45263157895 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48579494372 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8179510837 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377564333814 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153482877486 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122028487297 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251978489682 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11364720938 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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