In many countries, fast-food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
In many parts of world, the availability of fast food is becoming low priced and immense. I believed that disadvantages eclipsed by its advantages due to its effect on health and more calorie's intake.
To commence with, fast food have demerits and merits too. Advantages of fast food are that, these are easily available and very affordable. The easy finding of fast food and cheap price attracts people towards it. For example, McDonald's has increased their income by offering new and affordable deals on food. Hence by knowing about precious deals, customers are readily consumed this food just because of discount.
Secondly, the fast food has more disadvantages it is very effective to our health. To explicate it, the consumption of fast food leads to the cardiovascular diseases, cholesterol,acidity. For instance, famous researches shows that the rate of cardiovascular diseases has been increased by 55% due to the intake of fast food. Thus, the fast food is too dangerous for our health and our digestive system.
Furthermore, the intake of junk food means the intake of more calories. To elaborate it, this oily food is deep fried which contains more calories, fats and trans-fat. To epitome, the oily food has fewer nutrients but more calories whereas,the healthy food has good energy, minerals but less calories. As a result, more consumption of calories causes weight gain if you are eating these type of a food products on daily basis.
In conclusion, it is severaly drastic to consume the fast food because of health issues and weight gain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87839473492 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8889241398 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323438784781 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1176665658 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610566635012 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18638226892 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643648121328 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.