Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some believe that governments should invest more railroads rather than highways and road. In my opinion, governments had better allocate a fair budget on both types of transportation as these modes provides great benefits to our society.
On the one hand, There are two main benefits with investing railroads. Firstly, if government spend more money on expending and improving on railways, it would be able to contribute to the economy because investing on rail tracks can reduce product delivery cost between factories and ports. It will decrease the transport time. Secondly, spending money on tracks will give good thing to the public who use the trains when they are going to travel. Many will take on the train with reducing less moving time. Furthermore, the more people use the trains, the more it will cut down on the emission of methane. As a result, we can protect the environment. So, it aims at killing two birds with one stone.
On the other hand, developing railways will take too much time and money because of forest clearing to make rail tracks. Even though, after finishing the construction, governments might be able to money and time for delivery cost and traveling, before that, it have to destroy the forest and maintain to set up the rails. It will affect seriously ecosystem and the habitat of wildlife. It might be better to spend more money to develop the roads for public transportations than train tracks for convenience with personnel.
In conclusion, it is argued that governments should develop the railroads rather than highways and roads for vehicles. In my view, it would invest money on well-balance to both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99636363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68511415335 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8712690764 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177212087171 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564025360111 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511955042429 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12016816386 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222691817558 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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