It is often argued that the government should finance railways instead of investing in roads. I mostly disagree with this opinion. To my mind, nowadays moving by car is the most popular mode of transport so authorities need to invest money in roads initially but also take into account the development of railways.
On the one hand, governments should spend the large part of their budget on the improvements of roads. Now more and more people are using cars for moving and as a result more cars are being produced on factories. Increase in a number of automobiles leads to the rise of traffic congestion. Consequently, people face a problem that they cannot easily and quickly get to work, home or other locations. So to overcome these difficulties the government has to improve the quality and the quantity of roads. In other words, it is necessary to expand the existed roads and build new ones, especially in the most overpopulated urban areas.
On the other hand, investment in the development of railways is also required. If country is big, only the network of roads will not be enough in order to provide an opportunity to get freely from the one end of country to another. So authorities must put a lot of efforts and money into the creation of transport network, which will include railways as well as roads, around the whole country to connect remote areas.
To sum up, although I agree that it is important to spend money on the improvements of railways, I believe that main funding should be done on the construction of roads since the amount of traffic jams is increasing.
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. 73
- Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Governments Should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... whole country to connect remote areas. To sum up, although I agree that it is i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, as to, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78985507246 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74074026768 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8417320833 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191854273505 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724214050676 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758437392376 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114493041033 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452400330901 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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