Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people tend to buy more and more different items, and it is considered to be the result of good advertising rather than real necessities of population. I agree with this view, the majority of people buy goods due to the trend or advertisement put in public places.
First of all, modern technologies allow companies to make advertising an extremely powerful instrument in order to attract people to their products. In other words, if people look at some billboards on the streets or pictures on the Internet which, for example, depict a happy family owing to the acquisition of a new iPhone, it will affect their mind and their emotions. As a result, they would want to buy an iPhone, regardless of what smartphone they have already had. Moreover, research has shown than economic consumer behavior is usually irrational. So, people tend to make decisions based on their feelings rather than logic.
Secondly, there is a wide variety of products and the only small part of them is really necessary for society. Taking into account basic needs of people in food, usual clothes and home, it is obviously that such great choice of goods is excess. On the other hand, the manufacture of items and at the same time money of citizens spent on them promote to the development of economics in country. it can be considered as a beneficial side for society.
In conclusion, I believe that the sales of common products represent the effects of advertising more than the needs of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...he development of economics in country. it can be considered as a beneficial side ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95275590551 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72036703421 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8550528591 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134935086455 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447137375265 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387166281611 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814114344297 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318337919821 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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