A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
An increasing number of people feel that animals ought not to be exploited, they should have some rights as human beings, it is argued that humans must employ animals to satisfy their different needs, including uses for food and research. I will agree this point and I try to illustrate in my essay.
Nowadays, people suffer from many illnesses because they eat too much meat. As a booming demand for meat, animals being hunted. Majority of people are not vegetarian so they like to eat food with meat. We can see that even wild animals are being hunted for peopleʻs needs today.
Additionally, eating too much meat cause for people, they would overweight and sick. Besides, some scientists are doing researches on animal. They do not realise that they have rights to survive, but a lot of researches can be seen on animals. Most times, mice are the most suitable ones. However, researchers catch rabbits for their experiments even they would have an operation on it. Based on some articles, several animals will died after an experiment. As a result of this, fauna will be decreasing and they face big problem.
To conclude, people have to eat and fresh products instead of eating meat and It will be beneficial for their health too. Probably, researchers can find another way to do research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'die'
Suggestion: die
... on some articles, several animals will died after an experiment. As a result of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87387387387 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49395015085 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3429401586 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404112238224 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119894756239 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145956107131 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264821433992 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158119302015 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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