Happiness is important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What are some important factors to achieve happiness?
Happiness has undeniably essential role to play in individual's life. Many people contend difference opinions about the definition of happiness and ways to attain it. There are, in fact, several factors that define happiness and influence its accomplishment.
One of the prominent reasons making happiness hard to be defined is the variation in attitude about how to satisfy human beings as different people have different satisfaction. Take the wealthy as an example, a basic house and nutrient food seem never enough for them. Those affluent people require luxurious place to live and fancy lavish food to devour every day. In stark contrast, however, people stemming from middle income class tend to be easily satisfied. They simply need a stable job so that their families can live on. As for those who are considered unlucky in their life, perhaps winning a lottery would make their dream come true whilst other argue that winning this kind of bet may put their life at the risk of being robbed or kidnapped.
Another factor that makes us unable to clarify happiness is insatiability as the grass on the other side of the hill is always greener. This means the objectives in life of some people seem to continuously move onward which never be fulfilled. By way of example, a piece of candy can satisfy a 5-year-old kid but 5 years later, we may need a full box to satisfy him. Similarly, a 6.5 band score on IELTS can make an undergraduate's dream come true while a post-graduate requires an 8. Clearly, these ambitions keep us from conquering happiness.
As a result, people feel less satisfied or unsatisfied once they remain too many ambitions. There are, obviously, ways to attain happiness. And the most apparent one is that we should set suitable target to achieve and be ambitious enough to fulfill our dreams.
All things considered, there are various ways of defining happiness which cause confusion between people. However, clever people will always find their happiness by stopping being insatiable and staying grateful for what they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'seem'.
Suggestion: never seem
...xample, a basic house and nutrient food seem never enough for them. Those affluent people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, as for, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04093567251 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67651050652 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62865497076 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.821833124 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7368421053 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17421296716 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542769947143 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063177328105 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111690887983 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775639699452 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.