Happiness is very important to individuals, but it is very hard to define. Why is happiness hard to define? What is your definition of happiness?
In life, so many things meaning with us and happiness is one of them. Happiness is the abstract emotion, and survived in human socially, impacted by around environment. It brings health benefit, positive thinkings and senses of fun. But if you ask people to define happiness, you will discover that they were crestfallen to give you answers. How can something so
fundamental to all humans be so hard to define? No doubt it has something with happiness largely being subjective.
Happiness is hard to define because what make is happy varies so much. It can begin with the simple things like eat, sleep, relax to the complex jobs as create music, a dissertation on history makes us happy. Depend on hobbies and personalities of humans; it only makes sense that we define happiness in different ways.
Personally, happiness mean a couple of thing to me. It is the crystallisation of trying and effort in working. This feeling tough to describe, that hardship when you under the press and sleepless nights to complete a mission. Finally, you receive a reward for what you spent.
Another aspect of happiness for me is having work that is meaningful and rewarding. Let me be clear about this. They are easy jobs like help elder man's, gather with your family, give and take. Sometimes you will see the smile on their face and that gesture stagger you, choked speechless. This is a source of real happiness for me.
To conclude, happiness is particular that each of us defines. We do not need to worry about comparing ourselves to others, which only leads to disappointment. If someone questions you: are you happy? The answer is yes, you happy on my own and what I have
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: a couple of things
...rent ways. Personally, happiness mean a couple of thing to me. It is the crystallisation of try...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80276816609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68312718034 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612456747405 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1706042542 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0909090909 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1363636364 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267357174105 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087164431588 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937996466669 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150315389425 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589362311224 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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