Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this opinion?
There is no doubt that health care is always a very hot problem. It is said that people need to pay for health care irrespective of a person's income. I totally disagree with this opinion. Although everyone ahould keep themselves healthy, the government have responsibility for paying for as well giving their citizens the best medical service.
In the first place, obviously, the pace of life is faster and faster. People are busier and busier, they have more work to solve as well as have less time to spend on themselves and their families. In other words, they have no time to take care of their health.Moreover, the fee is quite high, which make contribution to the fact that people don't want to go for a health check. If health care is free and the government stimulate people to have annual check-ups, they will find that how beneficial they can get from regular health care. As a result, they will arrange time to go to hospitals or clinics to protect their health.
In addition, the porpotion of the poor is the main reason why health care should be on the house. Although this rate has decreased dramatically, the figure is still a hot concern. Especially, in most developing countries, the percentage accounts for more than 50 % of their population. Thus, if health care must be paid for, the poor will not have enough money to afford. Consequently, epidemics will spread rapidly, the number of deaths will increase and the national economy is going worse and worse. Only by providing free health care with inhabitants, can both residents and financial system develop better and better.
To sum up, to make sure that all citizens will have better and health and stronger immunity, the government ought to have responsibility for providing free medical service with people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ve no time to take care of their health.Moreover, the fee is quite high, which make cont...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ke contribution to the fact that people dont want to go for a health check. If healt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89144736842 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67459405756 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.228782422 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343705852463 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113931500279 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702208034248 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20683617382 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563244029196 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.