Healthcare is a important aspect of a person's life, without proper health, life will not be an enjoyable experience. Therefore i believe healthcare should be free regardless of a person's age or income. In this essay i will provide reasons why i think healthcare should be free.
Bad health can be caused by several reason, one of them is accidents. Accidents cannot be foreseen an prevented. For example, accidents caused by poor driving conditions are everyday norm in our society.
Another reason for bad health is our modern day life style. From our food to sleep, everything have an negative impact on our health. Long work hours, lack of good sleep and bad diet contribute to ill health. Some of this can be prevented and maintained while others are out of control, so healthcare should be free and accessible to everybody without considering their income or background.
However, some people argue that the health of a person is in their hands they should be responsible, therefore healthcare should not be a free asset. This may sound good initially but can only be applied to a few things in our life. For example, we can control our food or sleep to have a positive effect on our life. While a majority of things cannot be controlled,others like accidents and emergency health conditions are out of our hand.
In conclusion, a good healthcare system is an essential asset of a successful society. Individuals can only control a few things to make their health good as opposed to injuries or accidents which are out of hand. Therefore, personally i believe healthcare should be free and accessible to all peoples regardless of each individuals income or wealth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83038869258 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78208361879 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459363957597 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 283.0 20.2975951904 1394% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1367.0 106.682146367 1281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 283.0 20.7667163134 1363% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 80.0 7.06120827912 1133% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386225330886 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.386225330886 0.084324248473 458% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240271689576 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771796563455 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 142.8 13.0946893788 1091% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -207.31 50.2224549098 -413% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 112.5 11.3001002004 996% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.63 8.58950901804 240% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.2 10.1190380762 1138% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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