Trying hard is the motto of some cultures to achieve their goal. Some cultures teach their children that they can achieve almost anything if they work and try hard. At first glance it may seem that this is a good practice, but there are some drawback to it. In this essay i will explain a few advantages and disadvantages of this practice.
Starting with the advantage, motivating children to work hard to accomplish their goals will make them strong and focused. They will be less likely to be distracted from achieving their goal and they will determined until they reach their destination. While in the process they will have to deal with so many harsh conditions which will help them in future to deal with any type of such situations. Failure is also a major component that will come along when someone is working hard to accomplish something. Learning to deal with failure and understanding the mistakes to will lead to major progress.
On the other side, the cons are to be considered. Working hard to accomplish a goal that is impractical will lead to nothing but failure and misery. One should know beforehand that a particular goal is possible and achievable, and if not, a lot of time and energy will be wasted for nothing. To avoid this situation parents and teachers can help guide their children to their goal and make sure if they are are on the right track. Stress is a major side effect of hard work and if not monitored it will lead to catastrophic loss and failures, especially in children.
In conclusion, teaching one's child to work hard is a positive thing and have several pros along with some cons. If carefully monitored and guided, working hard will help children to help reach their objectives and develop several skill along the way. Assist from parents and teachers can be used to terminate the disadvantages and comfort the youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70987654321 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51496814626 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 324.0 20.2975951904 1596% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1526.0 106.682146367 1430% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 324.0 20.7667163134 1560% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 51.0 7.06120827912 722% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280416770164 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280416770164 0.084324248473 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21138127466 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145027644867 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.8 13.0946893788 1243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -240.46 50.2224549098 -479% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.3 11.3001002004 1127% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.52 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.58 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.6 10.1190380762 1301% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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