In this era, television and movies have more influence in our society. Television is one of the important facilities in a house. Television can entertain people and provide time to spend with family. Sometimes, teenagers prefer to watch movies with their friends at theater due to limit of house’s area. How could television and movies have influence with people? Some people believe that movies and television have no effect to them, others say that these two medias cause some serious issues to people. In my perspective, I think that movies and television influence to behavior for many reasons.
First and foremost, there are a lot of programs present about health care and skin care. Programs about health care including skin care advertisements present ways to take care of yourself from inside to outside. Nowadays, people care about important of health care, most people need to have a long life. Some people want to spend more time for themselves, but some just want to stay with their children as long as they can. So, people change their eating behavior, and exercising behavior. Some people used to eat only fast food without fruits and vegetables, some people say that they exercise enough, they breathe every day, but after watching television they have changed their eating and exercise behavior. Therefore, television’s programs and advertisements have influence to people eating and exercising behavior.
Moreover, people can learn to analyze and organise situations from news. For example, there is news about a woman was killed because she used mobile phone while walking. At the same time, there was a robber pull mobile phone from woman hand, but she resisted and pulled her phone back. Robber became angry and killed woman by a knife and took a mobile phone. People who watch this news can analyze that they should not play phone while walking and should prepare some stuff that can protect them from danger and think critically; for instance, when this problem occurs, the best way to deal with this problem is that they should give robber a phone to save their life instead of fighting with them and tell police officers to catch a robber. Therefore, television influences to analyze and organise behaviors of people.
Last but not least, can influence people to have more ambitious for instance biography documentary of the famous person. For example, Elon musk who is the founder of SpaceX, SolarCity, and Tesla Motors company. The documentary explains the challenges that Elon has to face with; for instance, he used to pay all money he has to invest SolarCity, SpaceX, and Tesla Motors. Although it is true that investment by using all yours money like Elon are risk, outcome are worthwhile. People try to change their the way of living to become successful like him. In addition, movies also help people who watch have more creativities and ambitious to make their own film. Therefore, television and movies influence people's behavior of imitation and adaptation
All in all, people are influenced to their eating & exercising behavior, analyzing & organising behavior, and imitating & adapting behavior by television and movies. Even though it is a fact that television and movies have advantages, it should be under parents control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 10.4138276553 307% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2749.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 534.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14794007491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59626916726 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477528089888 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 506.74238477 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5871602798 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1785714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265813469541 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893943657697 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827882843742 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172797944776 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074144200631 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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