If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether people choose not working lives or lives, which take individuals a great deal of time for work is a controversial issue. In my opinion, working is an intergral part of human's life, therefore, it is mandatory for people to work even their jobs may constitute majority of their schedule.
There are several reasons behind the phenomenon that wokers investing a large amount of time and energy in working including working benefits, passion and personal background. The first point in support of this view is that people can receive additional income from extra hours. With more money received, working people are able to improve their living standard and live better off themselves. Likewise, by working longer time, workers can gain more experience from their tasks, which allows them to achieve professional progression and climb high on the career ladder. Besides, there are people who are passionate about their work, they have a tendency to commit their resources for contributing more to organisations. These individuals would feel that if they do not support their company enough, they may not be deserved the salary, perks and allowences that are given to them. Finally, some disadvantaged persons are unable to land a job that require standard working time, thereby accepting working additional time in exchange for the work. This is especially the case for impoverished people or individuals, who are not equipped with adequate qualifications. Thus, working or not is not optional for most persons, there are motivations for people working extended time.
Admittedly, there are still occasions when overwork can cause detrimental impacts on wage-earners' mental and physical health. It is common that job holders regularly experience stress and anxiety. This stems from the fact that fierce competition in the labor market and heavy workload in modern workplaces constantly require woker's to learn and improve their productivity, which can exert a budern on the working people. Likewise, people spending long hours working physically demanding jobs may encounter injuries. This is because people have their physical limit, thereby, long-time exposure to work place them at greater risk of haivng accidents. Thus, people, who are busy with work are prone to hurting and mental illeness. However, given the enhancement in working environment and safety procedures, the impacts from the development are alliviated. That is why working
In sum, working long hours is a popular movement in nowadays world. Therefore, I disagree with the idea that people opt for being unemployeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[2]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
Whether people choose not working lives or lives, which take individuals ...
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Line 3, column 874, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment are alliviated. That is why working In sum, working long hours is a popular ...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...orking long hours is a popular movement in nowadays world. Therefore, I disagree with the i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, still, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39408866995 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7797178845 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.917219839 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328262636979 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106511947292 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701918798437 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213356485265 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683169732935 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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