The impact of environmental pollution on human health

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The impact of environmental pollution on human health

As a leading ecologist Barry Commoner (2022) “Environmental pollution is an incurable disease. It can only be prevented.” Water, air, and land are the three essential elements on which all people’s life depends, have become more and more polluted. This essay will discuss some effects that environmental pollution could have on people’s health.
To begin with, human health suffers from many diseases as a result of air pollution. Air pollution may lead to poor air quality in both urban and rural areas by any chemical, physical, or biological factor. Air pollution has a wide range of health consequences for people. These are classified as either short-term or long-term consequences. Short-term effects include pneumonia and bronchitis which causes discomfort in the nose, throat, or skin. The short-term effects of this air pollution can be bothersome but are still milder than its long-term effects. Air pollution's long-term impacts might continue for years, a lifetime, or even the death of a person. Heart disease, lung cancer, and respiratory disorders are common diseases from this impact.
Water pollution, in addition to air pollution, has a significant influence on human health. The direct discharge of industrial waste into surface water, which people consume, has resulted in significant diseases. Examples of these diseases’ impacts are nausea, lung irritation, skin rash, vomiting, dizziness, diarrhea, and even death. According to the UNESCO 2021 World Water Development Report, almost 300,000 children in the world under the age of five, or 5.3% of all deaths in this age group, die from diarrhea each year as a result of contaminated drinking water, poor sanitation, and poor hand hygiene. As a result, water contamination is a real-time hazard to the health of those who drink polluted water.
The last effect of environmental pollution on human health is soil pollution. Population growth, with massive amounts of man-made waste or even polluted water, also leads to soil pollution. People frequently report weakness, weariness, headaches, skin and eye irritation, coughing, wheezing, and chest discomfort in the short term. Some of the more common diseases associated with the longer-term effects of soil pollution include leukemia, liver cancer, skin problems, and muscle disorders. Therefore, individuals must be aware of the relevance of soil to their health and take protective steps to avoid major diseases.
In conclusion, environmental contamination has become a major worry in the effort to save our world. Given the negative consequences on people’s health, some concentrated efforts should be made to address this issue as soon as possible.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As a leading ecologist Barry Commoner 2022...
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Line 4, column 332, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...and chest discomfort in the short term. Some of the more common diseases associated with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98678993911 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567632850242 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.565899576 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308651838617 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982469874099 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106056445783 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164557697481 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446450400321 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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