Improvement in health education and trade are essential for the development of poor nations .However, the government of rich nations should take more responsibility for helping poor in such areas ? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many a least developed countries is combating with poor development in health ,education and trade. However ,some echelons of society subscribe the belief that prosper nations ought to take more responsibility for helping poor in such areas. I partially agree with this statement.
Lending a helping hand to developing nations help them to touch unprecendent heights of development. As, poor countries have less advancement in medical technology. Providing them with expert doctors and introducing new medical facilities can help them to eradicate fatal diseases, such as ,Cancer and aids .Moreover least developed countries have less control over global market which, influence their trade. Adopting the policy of free market and new world economic order ,1972 by rich countries help to foster the economic status of poor Nations .Adding to it, help from rich nations in enhancing the education system is acceptable as it open many avenues for further development and employment for citizens of developing nations.
However, money of developed countries belongs to their residents as, it originates from taxes ,custom duties and national resources. Spending excessive money for development of other nations ,may lead to aggression among local people towards the authority. It also creates burden on the economy of rich nations. Disintegration of Soviet Union is clear example of this phenomenon .As, the government of Russia spent heftiest amount on the satellite states that, results in movement against administration .Furthermore, poor nations should make prime efforts to overcome predicaments such as, dishonest officers that embezzled the money that is for development of country ,before seeking help from prosper.
To conclude ,mulled over over the proceeding information, it becomes clear that rich countries should help poor nations. However they should give priority to provide better facilities to own the country people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6404109589 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83644973197 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.288875083 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380561853598 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129671919808 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858456668275 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236361298994 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936067676567 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.