Some people believe that the radio is the best way to get news while others believe that TV is the better for this purpose discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Getting news by radio is considered to be beneficial to understand all the incidence for each. however, TV is more lucrative to gain in news for individual to expand the horizans of the knowledge in exciting way because its surrounds man with facilities of audio as well as visual. This essay will discuss both sides.
To begin with, advantages of getting all around news by TV this device has become a part and parcel of everyone's life. To exemplify it is alluring people to watch broadcast because of audio and visual effects. Therefore a section of society give prefer to watch it rather than radio. Moreover, people learn news more easily by watching incidents scenes for examples natural disaster such as flood, earthquake, Storms and other incidents and so on. watcher can more understand that's situations and help them as they can do.
Next watching news with the help of this gadget public can get through news and the availability of this equipment offers live interview of famous star from pupils follow this role model by personality such as shoes, clothes and so on.
On the other hand, radio is traditional way to gain news it has only audio facility furthermore this gadget more cheaper than TV show it don't upset the budget of poor people. apart from it this is never effect on eye side it is easy to carry anywhere and getting news at the convenience . As
a result it is good source of getting news in order to enhance their knowledge.
In conclusion, both have their own significance as way of my thinking TV is more praise worthy to getting knowledge because of some factors such as a dumb person who is never fall first in the news and they can understand by watching scenes and pupils are more exciting to watching upcoming scenes.
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Suggestion: However
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Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75570032573 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52746759169 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4211610695 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268407686862 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098478257114 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423826287712 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140786454671 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485492458524 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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