Some people think that it is more important to plant tree in open area of towns and cities than to build more housing. to what extant do you agree or disagree?
Afforestation plays an important role to protect the environment. Presently, it is considered that planting more trees in urban areas are useful. However, Establishing lots of homes for mushrooming population in cities is also considered to be necessary.Here, I would like to accord with the former view with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the view of logging in open areas of mega cities. First and foremost, in this materialistic era, the increasing number of vehicles in cities are the major cause of air pollution. These means of transportation emits harmful gasses in atmosphere which pollute the environment at a large scale. Therefore, the plantation of trees and shrubs is the capital way to reduce the level of pollution. Moreover the presence of much greenness is worthwhile for the rising population in urban areas. As they face many health hazards like respiratory problems which could be controlled by more plantation in such area.
Over and above,the scarcity of trees is responsible for ozone layer depletion .As it effect negatively and leads to health disease such as cancer, skin injuries and so on. To control this ailments in mega cities
, It is necessary to plant more and more trees.
On the second side, there are multifarious points to endorse the development of houses in urban areas. In this fast paced era, the increasing level of population need much space for accommodation.Thus,establishing houses are much crucial instead of planting trees. Moreover, trees can be planted in rural areas because mega cities provides much facilities for people living there.
In conclusion,I personally believe that, afforestation is much worthwhile to survive in this environment as compared to building houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32974910394 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32737371155 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0568533826 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186995053754 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646845556273 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074457745329 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108580931991 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766652436418 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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