With the improvement in the today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
It is true that the life expectancy of many people all around the world especially in developed countries is on the rise compared to the past. While it can be difficult and challenging for officials to manage the increasing numbers of elderly people, I believe that some solutions can be taken into account to mitigate the impact of ageing population.
Several problems and challenges can be anticipated for growing life expectancy. Firstly, the number of retired people will increase compare to that of working adults. This means that the government in such situation may receive less money in tax. As a result, officials will be forced to put more tax burden on working adults to compensate for state budget especially the pension of elderly people. Secondly, when people grow older and live longer, they can develop more health issues, resulting in more visits to doctors and hospitals and more usage of pharmaceuticals. In such condition, the expenses of healthcare system will increase, as the supply cannot meet the demand. So, if the old people cannot afford their costs, their children might be forced to work harder to support them financially.
However, the problems mentioned above can be solved. To solve the first issue, officials can encourage migration to attract more working adults who can pay tax. This might reduce the additional tax burden on individuals in the host country. The next step can be getting international assistance to increase state budget. Official can use a part of this amount of money to allocate among old people as a financial aid to make ends meet. Also, government can increase the insurance charge which is taken through the salaries but this solution is unpopular and more likely to have some negative consequences, such as workforces strike.
In conclusion, in my view, the increasing number of old people can have some problems. But officials can address all of them by some constructive solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.121875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75757302431 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559375 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3923214159 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279583972339 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889483432918 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598117839083 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175141967018 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535608984169 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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