With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
The Health Care System is advancing more and more yearly. Aged people have to be taken care of by society, with the help of development in the health care system. This essay will discuss issues that society will face to deal with a raised number of elderly people and how to tackle those.
To commence with, In this globalized modern era, people in the society barely spend time and money on aged people and their population is also increasing. Nowadays, To lead life, everyone is doing some job provided that they can't able to spend adequate time with elder people. For an instance, Every demographic of people in society is spending their valuable time mostly solving issues in their professional work. So that they can't allocate time to spend not only to care for the aged but also for their children. Even though there is an advancement in the health care system, Only a few people can afford that high range of treatments. To exemplify this, In every family, couples are going to jobs to meet their daily needs and to save money for their children's education so that it is hardly sufficient to care for old people too. These are the two main difficulties that society has to overcome to show more care for elderly persons.
To deal with those issues, The government and Companies' role is very crucial. Companies should restrict their work timings by keeping their employee's personal life in mind and stop forcing them to work for extra hours. The government should provide extra subsidies on the new and costly treatments available in the market especially only for aged persons. For example, In India, the Andhra Pradesh state government has issued certain schemes only for old people such as Aarogya Sree card that will reduce the cost of the treatment by 75%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n their professional work. So that they cant allocate time to spend not only to care...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79738562092 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34867987403 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.890422803 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352698972132 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132393462319 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843106435558 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263036445422 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152054235548 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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