Nowadays, increasing population is serious problem of all over the world. With a sheer volume of the world population, production of consumers goods are rising. Moreover, Industrialization is also rising because of more demand of consumer goods. However, It is damage the natural environment. This essay will deal both cause and solution of this problem.
Todays era, commercialization, industialization and globalization are rising because of the dense population.They are starting to cut trees and plants for built up industries. Factories and industries are starting to release gas which increase a air pollution. Moreover, They emit chemical wastage to water. Also, the increasing demand of consumers products because of human spoil the natural environment. Nowadays, people are using plastic bags which is harmful for natural environment. Sometimes, luxurious products like car, air conditioners are also the increasing air pollution and resulting a temprature is also rising. Human activities are also damaging natural resources.
However, There are some solutions of this problem. Firstly, people should starting to reduce a use of unnecessary thing. Government start to restrict on increasing number of industries and should control air pollution and water pollution by taking panalty from industries. Human should started to use of alternative energy like solar energy. Industries should started to use eco-friendly product for packaging instead of plastic. Human should also started to use re-cycle products.
In conclusion, I think that both government and human are started to take steps to save natural environment. Natural things are gift which given by a god. Human are started to reduce use of unnecessary things and resulting industrialization also decrease and it help to save natural environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... rising because of the dense population.They are starting to cut trees and plants fo...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... starting to release gas which increase a air pollution. Moreover, They emit chem...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'air pollution'.
Suggestion: air pollution
... starting to release gas which increase a air pollution. Moreover, They emit chemical wastage t...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
... a use of unnecessary thing. Government start to restrict on increasing number of ind...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...g instead of plastic. Human should also started to use re-cycle products. In conclus...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rted to reduce use of unnecessary things and resulting industrialization also dec...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... industrialization also decrease and it help to save natural environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71691176471 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22704287045 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7105488803 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0476190476 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9523809524 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243970805755 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082496620557 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798515653208 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165155304883 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844172547467 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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