An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Many physicians and educators are found to migrate from their own underdeveloped countries to developed nations. Although this issue will deprive the healthcare and education system, increasing wages could be the solution.
The deprivation of school and healthcare system is one of the impacts of teachers and doctors' large migration to the developed countries. This is to say, there will be more limited numbers of professionals serving both sectors, leading to the rise of medical and education prices due to scarcity. According to the study conducted by the UN in 2012, there was an increase in medical & school prices in more than 200 hospitals and schools in Mumbai, causing high demand and low supply. This condition was found due to many professionals moving into the US for better job offers. Hence, the limited amount of professionals would make school and medical less accessible.
To tackle these drawbacks, compensating educators and physicians more is the suitable approach to prevent them from moving into developed nations. To put this more simply, a high paycheck would make them feel more fulfilled and fair to the jobs they endure. For instance, a survey done by the University of Oxford of 1000 doctors and teachers in Bangladesh in 2019 found that more than 60% of them had turned down job offers from the US due to the 20% increase in their salary. They feel it unnecessary for them to travel for the same salary compensation. Therefore, raising the paycheck would prevent professionals from flying to developed nations.
In all, the large migration of doctors and teachers leads to medical and school deprivation. However, it can be tackled by raising the compensation given by the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14642857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82965371291 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510714285714 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.296587792 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16413639742 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577935069686 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290163949615 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102201418471 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310240558147 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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