With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face conversation will be a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?
In this complex world, the development of advanced communication technology becomes more and more popular among society and updating every single day. However, some individuals argue that traditional communication systems like face to face communication will be disappearing by modern and upcoming communication methods. I completely agree with this statement.
According to the records, there are a majority of people are using the internet and it has become the base of the communication nowadays. From the last decades, this method has been used by people to communicate with their friends and relatives everywhere, by using smartphone or computer they can easily connect to the internet and have a chat with their friends. There are a lot of social networks which are very common nowadays. For example, the huge number of people using Facebook and Instagram to communicate with each other and some mobile apps are introducing by different companies to communicate like Viber, Whatsapp and skype. Moreover, most of the private sector companies are having meeting online which is a positive trend between a businessman who are in different places or countries and some times hiring staff and interviewing them by using video calls are more convenient for both parties. Many educational institutes are using this new communication method to communicate with students and having online classes are very popular these days. In other words, the latest communication system has made life much easier with useful features and inexpensive tool for society.
Furthermore, developing new communication is saving the time from avoiding the travel to one place to another and having a face to face meeting which can be considered as an expensive and unsuitable for modern life.
In conclusion, my point of view, that the modern communication system is changing rapidly every day and it will be updated with more and more new features which can be easy for human and have a sophisticated life in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3197492163 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94273059059 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1640557874 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198867454061 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823040229878 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644177838986 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142420947661 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452811897561 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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