With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face conversation will be a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?
In this modern world, advanced communication technology has become more and more popular between society and update every single day. However, some people argue that traditional communications like face to face meeting will disappear with modern communication methods.
According to the records, a huge number of people are using the internet and it has become the base of the communication system today. From the last decades, this method is used by people to communicate with their friends and relatives everywhere. By using a smartphone or computer they can easily connect to the internet and have a chat with their friends. There are a lot of social networks which are very common nowadays, such as, most of the people using Facebook and Instagram to communicate with each other and some mobile apps are introducing by different companies to communicate like Viber, Whatsapp and skype. Moreover, most of the private sector companies are arranging their online meeting between international businessmen in different countries which is a positive trend and some times they even hiring staff and interviewing them for their companies by using video calls are more convenient for both parties. In addition, many educational institutes are using these new communication methods to communicate with students and having online classes are very popular these days. They can do their assignments and projects by logging to the university server and complete them without even going to the classroom. In other words, the latest communication system has made life easier with useful features and inexpensive tool for society.
Furthermore, developing new communication is saving the time from avoiding the travel to one place to another and having a face to face meeting which is considered as an expensive and unsuitable for modern life.
In conclusion, I believe, the modern communication system is changing rapidly every day and it will be updated with more and more new features which can be easier for human and they can have an advanced life in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27659574468 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86050051689 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516717325228 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2337847017 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181418397538 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773836647415 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601283942177 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131809803147 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272212237663 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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