Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, it is generally acknowledged that a progress of a nation is based from the new contributions brought about change by the government or large institutions and not individuals. This essay disagrees and believes that change and development begins from a single entity.
It is an indisputable fact that an individual plays a pivotal role in allowing society to function. This is because, organizations are made up of individuals brought together to enable the group to achieve its mission. As a result, these organizations can make an enormous change because these entities have established a strong bond and shares the same goals towards the same advocacy. For example, Non-profit organizations are group of people dedicated in advocating for a particular point of view and making some changes to contribute to the society without gaining any profit. Moreover, my former colleague who established his own youth movement and platform for rural community development catering to more than 5 million youths in the Philippines to provide free education and health. However, it could also lead to the contrary of the good, for instance, the uprising of Arab springs brought together to revolutionized the rule of the local governments in the Middle Eastern regions.
On the other hand, government and large institutions acts for the society as a whole and often times effective in achieving success. Due to the reason that, they have a leader who plans and delegates work efficiently and respectively to an individual. In addition, Political power and substantial resources are the key factors in the improvements of a nation. For instance, the dictatorship of our late president of the Philippines, Ferdinand Marcos. He was an authoritarian who made an exponential growth to the economy through economic development strategies. As well as, large institutions like NASA who incessantly yields research because they are being funded with tremendous subsidies from the government.
In my opinion, I strongly agree that individuals can bring about tremendous change in the society. For without these entities, no government or even large institutions can be formed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
... era, it is generally acknowledged that a progress of a nation is based from the new contr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271276595745 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.122340425532 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0452127659574 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031914893617 0.0437548338989 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135638297872 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0403226058552 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16513571581 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031914893617 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.127659574468 0.0861772015684 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106382978723 0.021408717616 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106382978723 0.011925033212 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2190.0 1933.35771543 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36627906977 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398255813953 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337209302326 0.28420135186 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.252906976744 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186046511628 0.137316102897 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16513571581 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 68.1641345475 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9326780407 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 55.2209302326 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.25333333333 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183566583431 0.332605444948 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0839476569795 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0395397798072 0.0668466124924 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525432048379 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124949849538 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804545238432 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557813713181 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315547273956 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.140510271551 0.0638462369009 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161081172513 0.228012699653 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684251766459 0.058150111329 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 79.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9