Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary society, a wide range of changes are observed. Some people believe that these changes are the result of individuals' effort, yet others claim that the developments are able to be brought by governments and large institutions. In my opinion, the role of individuals on changes should not be denied.
At first, diverse countries are ruled by governments. Again, these governments consist of individuals. Hence, if governments entails new developments in society, it means that these changes are done by individuals. Another factor which is considered having indispensable rol...
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