Despite of , having the knowledge about the importance of species and biodiversity people are destroying them for their personal purpose. This essay will elaborate the causes carried out for biodiversity loss and probable solution for them.
In the beginning, population of world is increasing day by day due to this human being needs many houses for their survival which leads to the deforestation. People need land to build the building, wood for the construction so they just shells out the natural resources for their personal benefit. According to the survey done by world organization, deforestation rate is increased by 20% then last year. Hence, overpopulation is the major problem for extinction of flora and fauna.
Secondly, exact solution is not available for the preservation of natural resources but their is certain chance of getting the positive results if awareness program is carried out in the society. Ultimately, some people may not have proper education about natural resources so awareness program helps to educate the positive side of preserving them. According to the survey done by Facebook, high numbers of like and share are done for the post conserving the species and wildlife. Thus, human being should be educated about the advantages of biodiversity.
To conclude, over population is the main disadvantage for loss of different species and biodiversity while awareness program is the solution for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37610619469 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95459766855 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7688946194 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.454545455 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15959013318 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674937168955 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596766234899 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116449358537 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526331409156 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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